stories, make your own >:^D

Basically you write a short story and post it here for others to read and comment on. if you want you can post up chapters to a fan fic.


the point of this thread isn't to correct on grammar or give harsh ratings
its just to have fun

once apanna time the end. theres your story now go to sleep!

that wasn't scary or creepy T_T

you die! the end

-_-

hahahahahah my story is beter!

i'm having a friend get one of mine from acc for me

its not done yet

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Back in the early 19th century a little girl named Julia lived a seemingly happy and care-free life, unaware that soon everything would change.

She lived in a small town called Wayville with her mother and father. Her family was somewhat rich so they had a large amount of servants waiting on them hand and foot. Julia was kind of spoiled by her parents, when ever she wanted something all she really had to do was point to it and and it was hers. One day she was walking in the town with a few of her watchers and she spotted something that caught her interest, it was a doll shop. She entered the store and Gazed above her in wonder at the detailed toys, she had to have one and have one soon. She walked down the isle looking at all the dolls, the ones she couldn't reach she pointed out so her tall servants would get it for her. She was amazed to see that the dolls resembled every one in the town, there was one of her mother and one of her father but none of her. She was so upset that she ran down the isle screaming and breaking the dolls. The dolls were porcelain and easy for someone as small as Julia to break. She ran and Smashed as many as she could, while her servants tried to catch as many as they could. She stopped breaking dolls in time to see a glass case with a doll in it. She ran towards the doll and tried to lift the glass lid on the case, she saw a chair in the corner and moved it in front of the case, she looked around for something heavy. She spotted a set of heavy looking tools in the corner on a worn work bench with a chair in front of it. She moved towards the bench, She'd been so upset that this was the first time she'd noticed the shop keeper sitting there. She steeled her self the complain to the shopkeeper and reached for the keeper's shoulder. Before her hand even made contact the body slid to the side and off the chair. Julia shrieked when she saw the dead woman's face had the words "Don't. touch. Me. if. you. know. whats good. for. you." carved into it's pale gray skin.



Julia grabbed the tools and ran back to the case determined to break the doll then leave. She hopped up on the chair and stared down into the case in shock. That doll was the one she'd been looking for since she'd entered the shop so instead of smashing the case open she called forward her servants and ordered them to use the tools to get her the doll, and they worriedly obliged.

While the servants were getting her the doll she desired she stood on a pile of broken porcelain tapping her tiny heals crushing it into shards and dust. Every time she made a noise her terrified servants flinched as they worked until they had the case open. None of the servants touched the doll because they heeded the warning sings. Julia hopped on the chair shoving her servants aside and reached for the doll. Her hand was only a few inches away when she felt and evil aura surround the doll, she paid it no mind. She carried the doll like a baby so it's had was facing over her shoulder. As she left the shop the servants behind her screamed and ran out of the shop ahead of her in all different directions. One of the servants stayed with Julia but backed up a few steps. The servant that stayed was Maya her face creased in worry and pure terror. Not from Julia but from the doll that was looking at her and smirking. The doll mouthed the words "You listened, good for you. I'll let you live....for now." Maya grabbed the rosary hanging from her neck and prayed.

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